|Reviews for Chapter 5 of First, Do No Harm by Miz Black Crow||Reviews for Chapter:|
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|10th Jul 09
| K, I don't know how harsh of criticism I can give. I'm just not that kinda girl. And there's really not a whole lot to criticize here. But I'll do my best.
Ok, before I get to the real stuff, this bit here? "I never said it back in S-towns, but I always did like Red." It's sweet and all, but I just can't get on board with "S-towns." I had no idea what it was referring to at first. Let's nip that in the bud.
Willow and Faith, together? HILARIOUS. Especially when Faith realized that Willow was trying to put the moves on her.
And then you go and get all poignant over coffee. It was interesting to see Faith go from screwing with Willow just for the fun of it, much like she would have in the past, to genuinely trying to help her feel better. I like all of the bits and pieces that you're letting slip by about the others, and even about Faith's reasons for hiding herself.
“This Faith chick? She'll find you. When she's ready.”
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