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Reviews for Chapter 6 of That Thing That Happened That Time That's Really No Big Deal by Forgotten Conscience Reviews for Chapter:


salty-goodness-lover(Anonymous)
12th Sep 08
Ch: 6
this was true to the characters and really heart breaking
Author Feedback: I'm glad you thought so highly of it, I wanted to be sure that the characters reacted in a realistic way to how they've been in the show and the comics. But it's better when other people say it instead of me because then I believe them. Thanks a bunch for the feedback.

lynnicaec(Anonymous)
09th Aug 08
Ch: 6
OMG! i can't believe satsu killed faith you should totally do a sequel, i would be forever in your debt!!!! smile.gif
Author Feedback: Lol, well, you know there's no evidence at present that Faith is actually dead. Dying and dead are two entirely different things. smile.gif As for the sequel, I have an idea in my head but I've got quite a few other fics going and I can't afford to stretch myself too thin with them. Hopefully I'll get to one soon.

Jinxgirl(Signed)
28th Apr 08
Ch: 6
AGGGGGGGGGGGGLHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH! THAT IS A HORRIBLE ENDING! You have to have at least one more chapter, come ON! that is torturous... okay Faith didnt' die. Faith doesn't mind in my mind, and Willow saves them and then Buffy takes her into her arms and they kiss madly adn all is well. Yep. New ending. My ending. Lol. I KNEW I hated Satsu, now that is someone Buffy needs to be punching out and stabbing. grrrr
Author Feedback: No one ever seems to like this ending, I really don't get it. smile.gif Just kidding, I get it. But hey, at least you have your own ending to give you the ending you really want right? smile.gif That's something isn't it? I like to think so. I suppose Satsu sorta overreacted to everything, but life is nothing without its overreactions sometimes, or at least I like to think so anyway. I'm not sure more punching and stabbing is the best solution to the problem, but I guess if that's what you want I can't stop you. Thanks for all the feedback, and I hope you don't hate me too much so that if I ever write some kind of sequel, you'll read it and everything else I'm writing too. smile.gif

27th Mar 08
Ch: 6
Do you have any idea much I'm willing to beg you to come back....anytime. I really don't care when you come back as long as you come back because this ending as great and insightfull as it was....can not be the end. This has to be continued...whenever you can even if its a year from now I really don't care. Just as long as its continued and something is done and the answer of what the hell happens next is answered. usually I'm a lot more profound in leaving feedback...but this is all I could come up with. Leave you with this though..

Amazing story, wicked ending! clap.gif thumbup.gif ohmy.gif
Author Feedback: smile.gif Begging always helps. I could do with some begging. biggrin.gif Course, that's gonna be an issue when I don't deliver right away. Might create less begging. cool.gif And don't worry, any feedback is better than no feedback, though I am partial to profound feedback. smile.gif Glad you liked the story though. It seems hard to get people to actually give feedback on other stuff, but I'll survive on this stuff. Thanks a lot for the feedback, it's appreciated. hug.gif

geega(Signed)
25th Mar 08
Ch: 6
clap.gif thumbup.gif worshippy.gif dude great story but you got make a sequel. you can't just leave us hanging like that. please make a follow-up and let us know if and when you do thanks your stories rock worshippy.gif thumbup.gif clap.gif
Author Feedback: I'm so glad that you thought it was a great story. Unfortunately, I may have to leave you hanging like that for a very long time. Hopefully not too long, but it could be. I'll try my best to follow up after I'm done a bunch of other stories. smile.gif Thanks for the feedback though, it's always appreciated.

buffyfaith(Signed)
25th Mar 08
Ch: 6
OH OH HO NO NO NO you did NOT just do that to us...thats messed up but i guess kinda of funny cause we did beg for more and we got what we asked for but DAMN...damn man i'll make up a happy ending in my mind mad.gif hug.gif
Author Feedback: You kinda did ask for more and you kinda did get it didn't you? biggrin.gif Which means if anyone's to blame for how it's ending, people should be looking in the mirror. clap.gif Just kidding, I love you guys. Feel free to make up a happy ending in your mind if you like, but I may get around to making up my own one day. smile.gif Until then, you can have whatever makes sense to you. Thanks a lot for the feedback, it helps the writing along. biggrin.gif

webspyder(Signed)
24th Mar 08
Ch: 6
Yes, I read the author's note - even so, a sequel is a must here. If you have three or four other fics you have to finish before you can write the sequel to this one all I can say is you better get to writing! You can't just leave us hanging like this. It is definitely of the wrong.

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On reading some of your other feedback and then your subsequent responses - if your other fics aren't getting the quantity/quality feedback that this one is, maybe that's a hint that the sequel to this one should take precedence. wink.gif
Author Feedback: Hehe, yeah, but if I did everything that people wanted me to when writing, then the story wouldn't have ended the way it did, would it? smile.gif So if I can live with people hating me for ending things the way I did, then I can live with not getting feedback on my other fics. biggrin.gif

It'd just be nice sometimes to know that people were expanding their fanfic pallet and reading something else for a change. So many people like the way I write Buffy and Faith, my other stories have Buffy and Faith in them too, they just aren't featured as much. Can't blame a guy for trying. smile.gif But hey, life goes on and so does my fic writing. Hopefully I'll get back to this story in the future if my other writing goes well. Thanks a lot for the feedback. biggrin.gif

Buckster(Signed)
24th Mar 08
Ch: 6
Awesome story. You can't leave it like this. When you can get around to the sequel, I'll be here to read it. Great work.
Author Feedback: Glad you'll be around. Seems like a lot of other people will be around too. That's good, could always use more fans. smile.gif I hope that I'll one day be able to write a sequel, but now is not that time I guess. Still, there are lots of my other stories for people's reading pleasure if they wanna read something interesting. biggrin.gif Thanks for the feedback.

hael(Signed)
23rd Mar 08
Ch: 6
oh come on!!!!!! she's not a goner!!!! you have to let her live!!!! i'm ordering you!!!!

ok that's too much...im not ordering you...so prett please make her live....
Author Feedback: Heh, I'll be sure to give it some honest thought as to whether or not I want her to live. But even if I did decide which to do, it'd still be a while before I actually got around to writing it. cool.gif Maybe if I got the kind of feedback on my other stories that I did on this one I could speed up writing those ones and finish them so I can get back to this one. biggrin.gif Just a thought, you don't have to take it. Thanks for the feedback. smile.gif

lycanthrope(Signed)
23rd Mar 08
Ch: 6
you know i actualy like the cliffhanger ending. it does it justice. the whole will she die wont she die thing you have going on here.
Author Feedback: Well that's good, it's been a mixed bag of responses. Some people say they really like the cliffhanger stuff, other people say they hate it. Glad you said you liked it, because then I must be doing something right. smile.gif Thanks a bunch for the feedback.

RoutineRiot(Signed)
22nd Mar 08
Ch: 6
NO NO NO NO! You are not NOT ALLOWED to end it there. I forbid it! I know that doesen't mean anything, but you just cant! I can't believe Satsu did that! Poor Faith. I do have a question, though. Is what Buffy said about being in love with Faith just something she said to get Faith to fight, or did she really mean it? I will wait forever for a sequel. I don't care how long it takes!
Author Feedback: Lol, well, since you asked so nicely... *starts writing*... oh, wait, oops.gif that's an entirely different story. biggrin.gif Ah well, I've started this new one I might as well continue. thumbup.gif As for the answer to your question, I already know the answer. But telling you would defeat the purpose of ending things on a cliffhanger. smile.gif

I've got a couple questions for you though. What if it's both? And what if Faith didn't even hear what Buffy said? biggrin.gif It could be neither or all three. smile.gif Do you really wanna find out? clap.gif Thanks for all the great feedback, it makes my next story better.

LunasMeow(Signed)
22nd Mar 08
Ch: 6
DAMN YOU FC!!! *I* WAS GONNA MAKE A NON-HAPPY ENDING FOR THAT CHALLENGE!!! Now you've gone and ruined it. I had it all laid out this morning too. Now it'll just feel like a bad copy of yours... But it was perfect. (Your ending.) I love your work. You're like the Fuffy bad ending specialist here.


...Dammit...
Author Feedback: Lol, I'm sure there are other people out there who were gonna write a non-happy ending for the fics they're writing. Your ending would only be ruined if you had planned on the same ending, or a similar ending. I'm glad you thought my ending was perfect. I can live with you loving my work too. smile.gif I suppose I have a penchant for bad fuffy endings, hmm, maybe I should work on that. Thanks for reading and feedbacking though. smile.gif

sorrow angel(Signed)
22nd Mar 08
Ch: 6
wait now, no no no, and NO! ya can't just keep us hanging here! it's just not....right!
c'mon, write sequel biggrin.gif
Author Feedback: go ahead now, yes yes yes, and YES! I can just keep you hanging here. smile.gif It's sorta what felt right to me for all the characters. Like I mentioned before though, I might write a sequel somewhere down the line, but I gotta be moving on for right now. I hope you'll stick around and read my other stuff though. You never know, one of them one day might be a sequel. biggrin.gif Thanks for enjoying and feedbacking.

NGBlue(Signed)
22nd Mar 08
Ch: 6
Okay in my defense I must say I counted to 10 2 times, and yet...I still have a desperate urge to Lynch FC. So without further ado: HOW THE HELL COULD YOU!?!?!?

But yet it is so tragic, so Buffy cold.gif sad.gif After you're done with all your other fics, please do make a sequel.

And yet I did enjoy every agonizing second of your writings big thumbs up smile.gif

I read about your options on writing sequels. My fifth option would be that she dreamt the latest part. The thing where she walks in the hallway and stuff, and wakes up knowing she has to make things right, and that would be part 7 wink.gif Hey wishful thinking here!
Author Feedback: Heh, well at least you attempted to calm down before attacking me. That counts for something at least. I'm sorry for giving you lynchy feelings, but that's how this story has to end for me, for now anyway. It makes me glad to hear you say that it was so Buffy, not sure about the tragic part. smile.gif You enjoyed the agonizing pain and suffering... you might wanna talk to someone about that and deal with that. It could be a problem. biggrin.gif The only dream sequence event that I can think of is in another fic I'm gonna write called "Just a Dream", but that's a long way off. Feel free to keep wishing though. biggrin.gif Thanks a bunch for leaving feedback, it makes writing easier.

Cavegirl(Signed)
22nd Mar 08
Ch: 6
oh come on that's a bad joke you can't end it like that there definetly has to be a sequel and SOON wink.gif
Author Feedback: Sorry, no joking around for me this time. smile.gif That's how it's gotta end for the next very long time. Other stuff has to come first, and I had to end it on a very fuffy moment so... there it is. smile.gif I hope you can still read my other stuff and enjoy it just as much as you seem to enjoy this one. biggrin.gif Thanks a lot for giving feedback.

mika(Signed)
22nd Mar 08
Ch: 6
ooh man.. tat's totally sad...
nicely done tho..
mellow.gif
anyways, takes for the wonderful fic
Author Feedback: So many people have expressed their sadness over the ending. It's actually surprising. I was expecting more of an angry reaction because things didn't turn out the "way they were supposed to". Things have been overwhelmingly positive if not a little teary eyed. Which is interesting. I can also live with your description of "wonderful fic". That's perfectly okay with me. biggrin.gif Thanks so much for the feedback and I hope you'll attempt to enjoy anything else I might write in the future.

youn2731(Signed)
22nd Mar 08
Ch: 6
Ha! I knew it was going to end up in a mess and Buffy without anyone. You kinda surprised me with Satsu and the stabbing though. Great fic even with the gloomy ending. I don't really think there should be a sequel because I think it might ruin the effect of this story. It can only go so many ways before getting ridiculous: Faith surviving, miraculously, and deciding Buffy isn't worth it. Or they can end up together. That would be too predictable. Or somehow Buffy decides she loves Satsu and it was all a big mistake. That would be stupid. Or it could all turn out to be one gigantic nightmare. See? Not really any cause for a quality sequel. All in all, great job on the story.
Author Feedback: Actually, interestingly enough, I had a 5th option in mind for how the sequel would turn out if I were to get around to writing it. But it might trample on another story. No reason to get predictable, right? I did consider the four suggestions you made as possible outcomes however, so good on you for thinking ahead. smile.gif I may just have to leave well enough alone with this story though. Long stories with no end in sight generally don't end. smile.gif I'm glad you thought the story was so good, I often wonder how people feel about my stuff. Thanks for all the great feedback and I hope it continues no matter what I might write.

Just Me(Anonymous)
22nd Mar 08
Ch: 6
So, now Buffy is suddenly in love with Faith? Buffy certainly has a funny of treating the people that she cares about. I hope Faith recovers and tells Buffy that she's not interested.

As for Sastu I'm thinking jail for attempted murder. I'm sorry, but I think it's rather obvious that I am not liking the Buffy in this fic at all.

Maybe after the way Buffy talked about Faith, Sastu convinced herself that she was killing a monster. Something less than human.
Author Feedback: Wouldn't killing another slayer because she thought she was less than human, make Satsu less than human by extension? The only monster involved in this situation though was the green eyed one. It makes people crazy don'tcha know? thumbup.gif

As for Buffy, desperate times call for desperate measures, and yelling at Faith always made sense and worked in the past. No reason it shouldn't now. smile.gif

I appreciate all your comments and hope that you might want to read my other stuff later, I don't always write Buffy the way I did in this fic. Maybe you'll like the next one. Thanks again.

WitherAway(Signed)
22nd Mar 08
Ch: 6
mellow.gif Oh wow.

Actually, sorry, I'm not overly surprised that's how it ends...

It really is a fantastic albeit depressing ending.

I look forward to your future writings smile.gif

(no pressure for a sequel from this fan)

Peace.
Author Feedback: Aww, thanks. Yeah, I suppose you wouldn't be too surprised by the ending. smile.gif "Happily ever after" is not my middle name, but I think it'd be cool and sort've ironic if it were. At least one person won't be stabbing me for not writing a continuation, that's a plus. One down, 600 to go. biggrin.gif Thanks so much for reading and enjoying my fic, it makes writing what's next even easier.

22nd Mar 08
Ch: 6
mad.gif GAH!! No, you can't do that. No! Just...

I'm going to go mad. Does she live, does she die? What happens. Ugh! You can't end the fic like that. It's not... it's not allowed! There should be a rule against ending fics like this.

sad.gif sad.gif sad.gif sad.gif

I know you said you wouldn't continue it but... can you do something I don't know maybe a standalone one chapter or epilogue to let us know what happens to Faith. Just one chapter? Then you can continue the sequel later, IF you decide to but... come one at least an epilogue!
Author Feedback: thumbup.gif I'd really like to help you out. But how it would go after that point is too complext to sum up in a single epilogue. Plus it'd kill any chance at a really decent sequel. Can't do that to myself. Sorry sad.gif As much as I'd like to, not so much. But I wanna go back to this eventually so maybe you'll get lucky. biggrin.gif Thanks for all the great feedback.

kenyon87(Signed)
22nd Mar 08
Ch: 6
is that really the end i hope not i wanna know if faith lives and buffy doesnt take it back and they live happily ever after or at least to some degree with demons and shit, great i hope its not done though rock on! peace:)
Author Feedback: Yeah, sorry, that's really the end. At least for now anyway. But I'd like to point out that a lot of people wanted me to continue this fic after the first chapter and... well, look what happened. thumbup.gif Are you really sure that you'd want me to continue? biggrin.gif Thanks very much for liking the story though, I hope you'll enjoy whatever else I write even if it's not a sequel to this here. smile.gif

rebalabroo(Signed)
22nd Mar 08
Ch: 6
i actually thought this was a pretty awesome more real end... if you do write a sequel i will happily read but otherwise i loved it.... no need to lynch lol...
Author Feedback: Well you know, I sorta ended it this way because the challenge specifically requires the story to be fuffy. If I'd ended it any other way I might get disqualified. That wouldn't be right. smile.gif I'm glad you think there isn't any reason to lynch me though, cause that would've seriously sucked. I'd rather be shot in the back of the head from far away with a high-powered rifle. Don't have to see it coming that way. biggrin.gif Thanks for saying you'd write a sequel if I wrote one and that you enjoyed the story.

Au3ke(Signed)
22nd Mar 08
Ch: 6
The end?

Oh come on! Don't leave me hanging like that!
I wanna know what happens next... Please?
Author Feedback: I'm sorry, I'd really like to help you but at this point I've got a few other fics that got put on the backburner thanks to this little gem and I really can't go around neglecting them anymore. Don't lose hope however that you might actually see a continuation of some kind here though.

My Forgotten Conscience series (sequeled by She Who Was My Love, and Mothers) still has one or two more stories left in that 'verse to tell and I finished that one almost 2 years ago or so. I just have too many other stories to tell first. I wouldn't have ended things the way I did in this fic if I didn't think there'd be more stories to tell somewhere down the line. Now is not when I'm gonna actually do that though. smile.gif Thanks for enjoying the story.