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| Reviews for Chapter 3 of A Cinnamon Girl by pat2082 | Reviews for Chapter: |
| 25th Jul 09 Ch: 3 |
D'awh. The ending was beyond cute. Colour me impressed. |
| 19th Feb 08 Ch: 3 |
haha this is a cute story. i guess i'll hafta buy the comic to see satsu tho.  what issue is she in? Author Feedback: Thanks. :-) She's in several issues throughout, starting with the first. |
| 18th Feb 08 Ch: 3 |
your grammar is really choppy, even for buffy-speak, but this fic is still giving me warm fuzziness. I'd recommend getting a beta reader. Author Feedback: Well, I'm glad for the fuzziness. I'll be honest, if this were a few years ago, I'd probably get a beta reader and all that, but you probably noticed how long it's been since an update, and I just kind of do this when the mood strikes now. I've never been a fan of grammar anyway...;-) No, seriously, if there's something that's confusing and whatnot, let me know. I'm always revising. I just seem to get in a style with Buffy fic alone, and I guess part of it is choppy grammar. |
| 17th Feb 08 Ch: 3 |
Hmm, I wouldn't necessarily associate Satsu with the synonym "bad ass girlfriend". Okay, we don't really know much about her yet, but the latest issue seemed to indicate otherwise. I really loved the conversation on the training grounds. Author Feedback: She was pretty bad ass in the cemetery with those swords. Something tells me she's a pretty bad ass slayer. In the same way Buffy is. |
| 17th Feb 08 Ch: 3 |
 AWWW that's was so cute... Buffy being all stuttering, and the cuteness of spooning... I'm liking this pairing... Considering that I'm a Fuffy fan all the way but Satsu has suddenly found a way through my thick exterior... Anyways keep up the good work and keep them chapters coming...   I mean this is the only Satsu and buffy fix I can get at least till the new comic comes out...  |
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