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| 14th Aug 12 Ch: 6 |
nice up-date. faiths reaction was a little milder than i was expecting,thought she would storm out after quinn! glad she didn't! who was in the hotel room? did i miss something or is it a twist to come? anyways nice. |
| 30th Jul 12 Ch: 5 |
Really sweet and fun stuff, love how Joyce is so supportive of them. Nice work  Author Feedback: I would like to think Joyce would be if Buffy was gay. I think she would be more concerned with her dying then who she's going out with. Thanks for reading |
| 30th Jul 12 Ch: 5 |
that was a nice chapter. so faith and buffy are going steady, that should be cute. and the berrys are two guys, they kind of sounded like "my two dads". only they are gay. Author Feedback: Haha yes that's canon Rachel's parents are gay on the show. She is adopted which is why I chose them to adopt Faith cause they are the only ones in the Gleeverse that would take a teenager. (IMO) And yes they are going steady. For some reason i'm writing them all mushy but it works. Thanks for reading  |
| 23rd Jul 12 Ch: 4 |
i hope quinn and rachel get together.they make a cute couple.i love the scene were faith filrt with buffy they are so cute together.they a perfect match with the slayer connection and bond they do together.they so want each other. Author Feedback: Well you'll just have to wait and see on that one. and I guess i'm living vicariously through my "Faith" so the flirting scenes come easy. thanks for reading  |
| 16th Jul 12 Ch: 4 |
so who is the lone passenger? and are they up to no good? nice up-date  Author Feedback: Now what be the fun in telling you? You'll just have to wait and see. Who and what they are up to. Thanks for reading |
| 05th Jul 12 Ch: 3 |
i`m so excited for the next chapter,so is quinn the same demon they want to kill?i love fuffy moment.they are so cute together.are they going to be a couple soon? Author Feedback: haha all in due time, very good questions that you'll just have to wait and see. but they do get answered just not all in the next chapter. I must say I love sappy Fuffy. Sappy Faith more than anything. Thanks for reading |
| 05th Jul 12 Ch: 3 |
very interesting chapter. makes you wonder about quinn and what exactly she is! that last little bit with the watchers was really cute! nice job! hope this feeds the muse! Author Feedback: haha well I'm glad you're wondering if you didn't I wouldn't be doing a good job. I on the other hand know exactly what she is. The joys of being the writer. thanks for reading |
| 01st Jul 12 Ch: 2 |
Another lovely chapter, buffy being oblivious to being gay was funny, and so was how faith mercilessly teased her. I'm surprised the police ain't after Quinn, when someone dies and their account gets cleaned out by a relative who just so happens to disappear, then the police would usually suspect that relative of foul play. Keep up the good work And for those who are asking what an oni is, it is a kind of demon. Author Feedback: Thank you I do love this Fuffy the banter is off the charts. shh for the purpose of this story lets say the police never found the bodies and the oni had "cleaners."  Thanks for reading so glad you enjoy it |
| 30th Jun 12 Ch: 2 |
interesting that faith saw herself in quinn. and this troll like creature seems to want quinn,why? and who or what is an oni?  rachel sure is a curious girl, asking a lot of questions. at some point i'll have to see a ducati, must be a crotch rocket! nice up-date. Author Feedback: Yup the whole brooding the world is on my shoulder type if you know anything about Glee her life was far from perfect she is/ was trying to find herself. Lol you answered your own question Oni is the troll like creature that Quinn is looking for. Gotta make it believable Rachel is naturally curious. This is what I had in mind for Faiths bike http://siyanor.com/photo/Ducati-motorcycle11536.jpg I think Eliza rode one similar to it on Dollhouse. Thanks for reading |
| 30th Jun 12 Ch: 2 |
Ha awesome little fic you got yourself right here! So Quinn is a bad ass demon fighter. Who is the Oni? Intresting... never saw her and Tina as a thing but nice idea. I love the fact that Faith and Rachel are sisters. That's a cool idea! Can't wait to read more about these trolls coming after Quinn. Yay Faith got kisses! Haha and Joyce is totally cool with the gay thing so that's a bouns...hopefully Wes won't be a little punk like he was when he first showed up in the show, buttt if heis I'm sure Faith and co will fix him right up!! Love the comedy in this! I kept laughing out loud during these 2 chapters can't wait for more. Hope you update soon! Author Feedback: Haha thank you:) and yup this idea really came about because of my best friend. She love faberry and I love Fuffy so I thought why not. Quinn was the logic choice for the deomon hunteress fir me I myself can't see Rachel as one. And I think the question is what an ONI? All in due time. And again it was really just to put her with someone establish the gayness lol. Their was only one choice when it came to that, who's gonna be more expecting then a gay parent home for Faith? Give her all she was missing. Yup first of many kissages (totally just made that word yup) and we all know Joyce was the best mom and we gotta believe that probably would have been just as cool as that about it, more worried about the motorcycle of course ah yes Wes lol he's more there for the comic releif I think some of the scene with him giles and buffy are the funniest. Kinda threw him in their to to give you and idea about when this takes place other than Mr. Giles is the "watcher" so glad you like it. Buffyverse speak can be sometimes challenging considering that's not normal speak, and comedy is hard in any "speak." Once I flush out this chapter I'm working on I'll update, I'm about 4 chapters ahead so and update shouldn't be to far off it's so easy to write when you know where you're going |
| 30th Jun 12 Ch: 2 |
i love this story.keep more coming.i hope u update more. Author Feedback: Thanks glad you like it! |
| 30th Jun 12 Ch: 2 |
This was amazing! And I'm so happy you put it in this form, only cuz you now update with more  Anyways, keep up the good work! I look forward to the next chapter! I mean, Faberry already kind of flirting, and Fuffy almost already on. This story is gonna be good! Author Feedback: Aww thanks you  Yes if you want the full chapter this is where it will be. Glad you like it and glad you made your way over here. I really can't decide which is my favorite Fuffy chapter this or the next one. For some reason its much easier writing young Fuffy. Stay tuned another chapter next week! Thanks for reading! |
| 29th Jun 12 Ch: 1 |
Good chapter, I hope there is more soon and buffy's personality seems very close to the real deal. It was always funny how buffy never paid attention to giles. Author Feedback: Ah thank you that's one thing about my writing it has to be perfect I have to hear them speak the lines I write. Yes that scene was totally different then I rewrote it cause that's one of the things I love about early Buffy she was totally in her own world. Thanks for reading |
| 28th Jun 12 Ch: 1 |
wow plz update soon cause this fic is officially my new favorite!!!! Author Feedback: Aww why thank you. This is probably the first fic that's been super easy to right as far as the plot. I'm glad you like it. I'll probably update sometime this weekend if not sooner. Thanks for reading. |
| 28th Jun 12 Ch: 1 |
 Bravo, Bravo this seems like a really good take on how things should have gone! Author Feedback: Ah well thank you. She definitely didn't get a fair shake. And I'll admit I didn't like are at first but then in just fell in love with Eliza. So in turn I fell in love with Faith. Thanks for reading. |
| 27th Jun 12 Ch: 1 |
really good start, excellent banter between Faith and Buffy, really perfect for their characters. Looking forward to more Author Feedback: Why thank you. You wouldn't believe how hard that stuff was to write. If I can't hear them saying it they won't hence the "perfectness." of it all. Thanks for reading glad you like it. |
| 27th Jun 12 Ch: 1 |
well, definitely an interesting and different start. i'll be interested in seeing where you take this fic. i hope you give us some of faiths background and also explain who and what quinn is? nice start Author Feedback: All in due time grasshopper. And as far is Quinn goes she's and everybody else in the who's not in the Buffyverse is a Glee character in name only. All the Glee stuff is AU. Thanks for reading |
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