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| 23rd Aug 12 Ch: 7 |
Up to chapter 7! And YAY Buffy is back! Was so waiting for that. And love the change up of Faith being the one to find her and take care of her. Makes me very happy. Author Feedback: Of course I had to have Faith be the one to find her and take care of her. That was the whole point in doing this fic lol |
| 18th Apr 12 Ch: 7 |
Wow...that was intense,from the fighting to the awkwardness between Faith and Buffy. Its understandable that Buffys first reaction is to run but when faced with danger I'm glad her slayer instincts took over and now she seems to "somewhat" trust Faith, so that's at least a silver lining in this whole mess. And the Scoobies still lying, bastards....guess they don't know their little plan worked or I'm sure they'd be out looking for Buffy. Good first interaction, intense and believeable. Kinda makes me want to rewatch the epic,but then again there was no Faith so I'll pass....for now anyway. Good job T! Author Feedback: There's always gotta be a silver lining in any situation. I'm glad you figured that one out cos I'm not sure many other readers did  Yeah of course the Scoobs didn't know their little plan worked. Just like in the show, they didn't know it worked until they stumbled upon Buffy in the alley. Yeah, I wanna rewatch that same ep, but I did a few months back when I started writing this and in my head now, it's never gonna be the same now that I'm writing Faith in there  |
| 16th Apr 12 Ch: 7 |
 sorry I thought I had left a review...my badAwesome chapter! It was really sweet of Faith to take care of Buffy! I can't wait to find out more of what kinda spell they used to bring Buffy back...they should havve not kept that from Faith. I have a feeling it is going to hurt there releationship with Faith!  I'm glad you are fixing all the wrongs the show did! It makes me happy! Now on to the next chapter!!   Author Feedback: No worried about not leaving a review, the fact of the matter is you left one now so that's better than none at all  I hope I can fix all the wrongs in the show, working on it piece by piece Glad you thought that was an awesome chapter |
| 12th Apr 12 Ch: 7 |
Oh Yeah!! Gonna change everything!!  Good to see that Buffy hasn't lost any of her speed, strength or fighting abilities. She's still a slayer despite being confused, hurt and disoriented. Like that you noted that Faith should give up smoking. Does instinct lead Buffy to Magic Box? Faith's feelings and reactions toward Buffy are both believeable and reasonable. As are Buffy's initial reactions to both Faith and Sunnydale. I can so understand how mad Faith is at the Scoobies for lying. Glad she lets them know. I'm thinking that Dawn may be furious too when she finds out. I like this new "pull" Faith feels from Buffy and the "energy" when she holds her hand. Hope Buffy feels it too. Buffy must trust Faith, even if neither realizes it, since Buffy is willing to stay at Giles' apartment with Faith rather than go home to Dawn and the Scoobies. Good chapter.  Can't wait for the next one. Author Feedback: Of course I couldn't have Buffy come back without her being at full slayer strength. It just wouldn've have seemed right... Not sure it was instinct that led Buffy to the Magic Box, more likely her just running through Sunnydale, trying to escape the "hell" she thinks she's in. The pull and energy Faith is feeling is gonna come into major play, but not until the Big Bad decides to start showing its face...that's about all I'm gonna say cos anything else is gonna turn into some major spoilers here As for Buffy staying with Faith, I don't think it has to do with trust. It has more to do with Buffy not quite ready to go home to see Dawn and the Scooby gang just yet. Thanks for reading and reviewing |
| 12th Apr 12 Ch: 7 |
Faith's reactions to the fact Buffy is back from the dead is so realistic here. A mix of shock, happiness and nervousness. Buffy's reactions to Faith being the first person she sees is right on, too. Really like that Buffy automatically assumes she's in hell because of her surroundings. Can't wait to see more of her reactions! Great chapter! Author Feedback: I really tried to get the reactions to Buffy being back from the dead spot on. Kept debating whether to rewrite this chapter, but after I let it sit for a couple of weeks I decided to leave it how it is and boy am I glad I did Although I'm sure you notice that some things are kind of the same from the show (borrowed a few elements here and there) I'm also trying to change it but it a very subtle way here. Hopefully I can pull off the rest of it Thanks for reading and reviewing |
| 10th Apr 12 Ch: 7 |
Hell yes, its gonna change everything. Faith has every right to be mad at the Scoobies, its gonna take a lot to repair the trust between them. Hopefully they'll have good explanation of why they didn't included her I know she's not in this chapter, but I just wanted to say that I'm glad that your writing Dawn in a mature way, not making a whining spoilt brat, and taking the time to make sure that Faith spends time with her, as opposed to just letting her stew, Buffy hopefully in the long run will appreciate it. She didn't throw herself of the tower to save Dawn, only to have her friends ignore her. If Buffy doesn't notice it. I'm sure that it will be brought up by Dawn during some fight between Buffy/Faith/Scoobies. I'm glad that Buffy's not taking a swing at Faith yet, but its bound to happen at some point, such is the nature of their relationship. Loved the chapter can't wait for the next one, more please. p.s. If its at all possible, please could you have Spike trip/fall/get shoved, over/into a sharp wooden point object? there are no expectations but I live in hope that it might happen.  Author Feedback: Of course Faith has every right to be mad at the Scoobies. Shit will go down and it may stew for a little while before things really get resolved between them. Dawn might not be in every chapter, same with Anya and the others, so I try to make it count when I do write them in. That'll change as the story gets further in of course. But you are right about how Buffy didn't throw herself off the tower to save Dawn just to have everyone pretty much ignore her. Are you sneaking peaks at my plot notes, F?   As for Spike, he'll get whats coming to him. Just give it a little time. I got some use for him so I can't get rid of him yet... Thanks for reading and reviewing |
| 10th Apr 12 Ch: 7 |
thanks for the update!! I want more tho!! please update soon!!  I would like to know what's gonna happen and i hope there won't be any complications now that she's alive... I wonder what's gonna happen to them... PMS Author Feedback: As much as I'd love to post more than once a week, I just don't have time to write write write like I used to, so it's not entirely possible for me to post more than once a week. sorry about that There's plenty that's about to happen and although in the chapters to come, it may seem like things are taking a slow approach, it'll pick up when you least expect it to Thanks for reading and reviewing |
| 09th Apr 12 Ch: 7 |
If you upload a chapter as good as this one it dont matter if you posted it on sunday or monday. I think it's worth it Well, at leats they didnt come to blows this time. i cant wait to next one. keep goin' Author Feedback: Aww thanks for that Spooof, I really did mean to post this one on Sunday, but it being Easter threw me off They might not have come to blows just yet, but it doesn't mean it won't happen at one point or another...  Thanks for reading and reviewing |
| 09th Apr 12 Ch: 7 |
i love faith taking care of buffy  and i don't blame faith for being angry at the scoobs! loved that she called them on the lying!got to wonder how they will treat faith now that buffy is back? can't wait for the next chapter, very nice job. good action scene. Author Feedback: I had to have Faith be the one to find Buffy and take care of her in this crucial time. It's gonna set things up for later on in the fic...it had to be done Glad you liked the chapter. Thanks for reading and reviewing |
| 09th Apr 12 Ch: 7 |
I absolutely love Faith in this chapter.  You have a true protagonist in making here. It appears like Buffy's coping somehow, and I hope Faith is with her in Buffy's recovery, every step of the way. You more than made up for last chapter. More soon please Author Feedback: Aww thanks, I've been playing around with Faith's character, developing her while trying to keep pieces of her in there too so I'm glad you loved her in this chapter You'll see how things go as the chapters are posted with just how Buffy is dealing/coping with being back.... Thanks for reading and reviewing |
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