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| 19th Oct 12 Ch: 13 |
Buffy and Faith screw, Buff freaks out, what else is new eh? Poor Faith she can't seem to cut a break. Roman gave me the wiggins, I can't believe he's the Immortal. Selwyn seems pretty cool. Liked the chapter onwards to the next one. (I'll get there in the end) Author Feedback: Yeah of course Buffy had to freak out...luckily for everyone that changes  Roman is a pretty key figure in the story, as you know...can't say much else without giving his game plan away (haven't even got that far in the chapters I've posted/written yet either) There needs to be a high five emoticon since you're putting in effort to review every chapter so....   |
| 25th May 12 Ch: 13 |
I've read all of your story up till now but, this is my first review, I'm sorry. I think it's a great alternate season 6 fic and you write the characters extremely well, especially Faith. I feel that you really capture Faith's struggle with her inner demons that are always just below the surface. I can't tell you how awesome it is to see Faith instead of Spike playing that part at the beginning of season 6. SOOO much better. I hope you keep it up because I would love to see what happens next. Thank you. Author Feedback: Don't apologize for not reviewing until now, but I'm glad you finally did though  I always have more fun writing Faith than Buffy or from a general point of view. Maybe I just get it a bit cos I have my own inner demons that I struggle with and that's probably why it makes it easy for me to write her a little more complex than she was on the show. Definitely keeping it up, writing has slowed right down lately but I'm determined to get myself back on track to stay with updating weekly  |
| 23rd May 12 Ch: 13 |
As much as I loved the sexy time I kinda feel bad for Faith! Poor girl is gonna get her heart broken before Buffy gets her head on right! Great chapter! Can't wait to read what u have for us next... Author Feedback: Yeah, poor Faith, but then again you never know how things might just turn around in the end for those two. After a few chapters, the angst level is gonna go down a LOT, so just keep that in mind |
| 22nd May 12 Ch: 13 |
 Invalid_Reality, The ending threw me for a loop can't to see how Buffy reacts to Faith Author Feedback: Yep, I always try to end my chapters with a little something (and wow, that was a lot of the same reviews from you  ) |
| 22nd May 12 Ch: 13 |
Invalid_Reality, The ending threw me for a loop can't to see how Buffy reacts to Faith |
| 22nd May 12 Ch: 13 |
Invalid_Reality, The ending threw me for a loop can't to see how Buffy reacts to Faith |
| 22nd May 12 Ch: 13 |
Invalid_Reality, The ending threw me for a loop can't to see how Buffy reacts to Faith |
| 22nd May 12 Ch: 13 |
Invalid_Reality, The ending threw me for a loop can't to see how Buffy reacts to Faith |
| 22nd May 12 Ch: 13 |
Invalid_Reality, The ending threw me for a loop can't to see how Buffy reacts to Faith |
| 22nd May 12 Ch: 13 |
Invalid_Reality, The ending threw me for a loop can't to see how Buffy reacts to Faith |
| 22nd May 12 Ch: 13 |
Immortal eh? Is this by any chance the same immortal in Season 8? Hot chapter!  Melted my screen right off. I'd always thought Buffy was the stronger of the two; she being the last Chosen and all....  Buffy always seems to pack a wallop compared to Faith. Hmm...Anyway, excellent chapter. We want MOAR!! Author Feedback: Big no on it being the same Immortal from Season 8. I figured there could be more than one Buffy always packed a wallop compared to Faith, but I think Faith always held back and Buffy never did. Have to change things up sometimes, huh? Glad you liked that chapter, more is coming! Probably will melt your screen right off again |
| 22nd May 12 Ch: 13 |
Great story so far and the immortal would make a great antagonist. Not a fan of buffy swearing though, it seems too out of character. Author Feedback: I don't think Buffy swearing occasionally isn't out of character, not at all, but that's just me. Glad you like the story so far |
| 22nd May 12 Ch: 13 |
that was pretty awesome, and I really want more, like right now. But I understand if you have to feed your puppy and do life things. It was cool that Buffy had the reaction she had, she wouldn't be Buffy if she didn't, now you just got to fix it though. excellelnt chapter. Author Feedback: Oh fix it, I will, but not for a little while yet. Gotta let things play out "naturally" first Glad you thought that was pretty awesome. I try  |
| 22nd May 12 Ch: 13 |
Haha...so Roman is The Immortal, definitely didn't see that one coming. I'm sure he knows who Faith is, I mean he has too right? He's The freaking Immortal and I'm sure he can "feel" a slayer out. I don't know...I'm doing that guessing thing again that I can't seem to turn off. I'll be patient, I promise As far as Buffy and Faith go? You know I bow down to your ability to perfect the sexiness Doesn't get any better than that...actually, I'm sure you'll prove me wrong over the course of this fic And even though I knew there was going to be some kind of fall out, I stupidly thought Buffy was okay with what was happening...I mean she seemed fine and very much into it, but I guess she was caught up in the moment and in the light of day she couldn't face it all. Poor Faith, she's got it bad...and that's all I have to say about that  Author Feedback: Yeah, Roman is the Immortal. I didn't know what else to make him, but then had this idea for him down the road from here so....yep that's all I can say about that As for the ability to perfect the sexiness, I do want to say that this is by far not my best. I felt a little rusty writing that scene cos I don't write the sexy-times very often anymore. But it's nice to know you and others liked it  Yep, poor Faith has got it bad. I mean who wouldn't? It's Buffy |
| 22nd May 12 Ch: 13 |
Wow, i didnt know that those levels of denial actually existed. Look forward to seeing how Buffy and Faith will deal with what just happened. Not to mention the Immortal. Author Feedback: Apparently those level of denial do exist, at least they do in this story and with some people that I've known in the past Glad to see you're looking forward to more. Got a few other things up my sleeve and I feel like I'm just now really getting started |
| 21st May 12 Ch: 13 |
The scene between buffy and faith, HOT, don't need to say anything else about that! so roman is the immortal and hes working with or for the first? not good. how will they resolve this one? very nice up-date. P.S. take the puppy for a walk before you write, it will knock him/her out. Author Feedback: Yep, Roman is the Immortal and he's working for the First, but there's more to it than what meets the eye. I didn't want to do the Trio like it was in the show. I found it lame and there's no way I was going to do a rewrite without doing something different in that aspect lol And I do take the puppy for a walk before I write, but all he wants to do it play and chew my living room carpet  |
| 21st May 12 Ch: 13 |
you evil, maniacal, horrible, torturous woman. GAHHH. *headdesk* I'd frickin' pay you if I had a goddamn job! AHHHHHHHH > Author Feedback: I swear I don't try to be all those things above, but I guess it just comes naturally |
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