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| 19th Dec 12 Ch: 4 |
Fuck. Yes. I love how you just took this story and made it your own. It was just veering left and right, then you came and drove it right down the lane and got a hole in one. Fuck yes. I will definitely be on the lookout for more of your work. My vote: A, for the win! |
| 28th Apr 12 Ch: 4 |
I am impressed by Faith’s ability to lead and recognize how to best to use the others [e.g., Dawn, Giles, Kennedy, Andrew, the SITs, etc.] as well as her ability to recognize that the SITs need her to tell them the story of The Chain which she does so well as the current senior and lead slayer she is to new slayers. Wish Buffy had been able to hear how good she was doing this – she would have been proud. I liked the use of Giles’ Ripper personality during the questioning. Nice job going back and forth between the action in the hotel room and Buffy struggling to get back to consciousness. I really thought that the part where Buffy struggles through her confusion especially about Angel and Faith just before she awakens is well done. I would have chosen a combination of A and C reminiscent of when Kakistos arrived at Faith’s motel room pretending to be the motel manager. In this case, Angel would be holding the pizza boy in one hand and the pizza in the other as they opened the door. I’m almost caught up. |
| 13th Apr 12 Ch: 4 |
Gah! Damn my internet for coming a week late! *sigh* Anyway, I'm sure whatever direction this goes in it'll be great. You guys are doing an awesome job!  |
| 12th Apr 12 Ch: 4 |
I liked Faith's speech here. Maybe some of it will sink in and stay there after the new slayers get off their adrenaline high. I liked the little snippets of Buffy's thoughts/dreams between the action. But now I'm worried about this story that the demon told them about W&H. |
| 06th Apr 12 Ch: 4 |
Awesome chapter! Writing was great. My vote is for B  |
| 06th Apr 12 Ch: 4 |
This was great!  Love take charge Faith, even if it's done begrudgingly. I vote A  |
| 06th Apr 12 Ch: 4 |
I'm thoroughly impressed with the direction this story is taking after this chapter I'm gonna have to go with option A on this one  Although option C would've been hilarious after all that build up, it just doesn't seem like the logical direction this story needs to take  |
| 05th Apr 12 Ch: 4 |
Omgggg, 9 votes for b and 10 for a... QUICK. SOMEONE CHANGE THEIR C VOTE TO B. |
| 05th Apr 12 Ch: 4 |
Nice chapter, Loved the explanation for Buffy's memory loss, and her slowly starting piece together who she was actually kissing. Kennedy, is just being far too brattish for my liking, please can someone put her in a near death sitch, that forces her to take stock. Loving the growth in Faith's character, watching her take charge and resist the urge to hurt Xander/Andrew when their driving her crazy, and actively taking the time to explain to the new SIT's what its like to have the power of a slayer flowing through you. The appearance of Giles' Ripper side always gets a from me. Please please lock Andrew in a room with a vampire & let him get bit, just the onceVote wise I'm going to pick B: - Because however awesome a Faith vs Angelus/Angel fight would be, it feels like a cop out. Faith needs people on her side, and she owes Angel a lot, but at the same time she doesn't have to fully trust him, plus Angel is so whipped when it comes to Buffy, it makes sense that he'd drop everything and rush to her side. |
| 05th Apr 12 Ch: 4 |
I think you explained the reasoning behind Buffy's confusion really well and pushed the plot of this story in a strong direction full of possibilities. I also like that you showed Faith attempting to take charge of the situation even when she was clearly struggling. It was nice to see Giles step up later on too, as it would make sense he'd be angry someone had 'befuddled' his slayer into an innocent little lamb. By the way, is there any chance you hate Kennedy? Not that I'm bothered, I've always been indifferent to her character and her relationship with Willow but me thinks you lean a little closer to the, "lets make Kennedy look like an annoying, irresponsible brat" crowd of writers.   Though I'm not sure how I feel about you abusing the F-word for emphasis in dialogue later on in this chapter, there are times it has a humorous effect and there are other, stronger pieces of dialogue that help balance it all out. I think you left this chapter at a place that any three of the options could be possible and I'm struggling with which route to choose. I'll go with...OPTION A. Let's say he's evil. It could always be revealed to be a clever trick later on anyway. Great stuff. |
| 04th Apr 12 Ch: 4 |
AAAAAA as Angelus... Angel is dull and boring as a bus travel, Angelus is badass! and now Faith have the perfect oportunity to take his ass down. excelent chapter! Faith in the border of a panic attack because of the slayeretts was funny. |
| 04th Apr 12 Ch: 4 |
Do I get to vote on my own chapter Well, I'm gonna. I vote Option B. I think Angel is a puppet for Wolfram and Hart and not everything that happens there goes through him. So maybe W&H did hire the demons and are setting Angel up to create a rift between him and the slayers, kinda fits canon if you squint hard enough. Although my vote is B, because it has a better chance of winning, my favorite is C. It leaves the story wide open for the next author and as someone else pointed out, makes the demon much less wimpy. Makes him actually pretty smart to have pulled the wool over their eyes and possibly escape?? Good luck to the next author, I had a lot of fun writing this chapter. Cheers, Rosemont |
| 03rd Apr 12 Ch: 4 |
I choose B, angel being evil would be a bad move akin to the boring old "riley is evil or a jerk" story that is or was common in B/F fics. besides, faith needs angel as he is the one who saved her and arguably her only friend. WFH had undermined angel before, the black ops team for one and other employees. So far, So good and i am glad that buffy's memory problem and delusion is finally explained as in my last review i was confused as to why Buffy saw faith as angel when she only had amnesia, so i'm glad its explained. Great story but the demon kind of sounded pathetic for some mythical akuma demon who is a professional assassin. |
| 03rd Apr 12 Ch: 4 |
a. angel/angelus. Nefarious!! hahahahahaa ten words ten words ten words. |
| 02nd Apr 12 Ch: 4 |
Good job rosemont! All the contributing authors so far are doing a pretty damn awesome story - taking it down so many twisty lanes I'm voting for b. A seems a little rash for angel when you have a hospital full of slayers - although the plan to befuddle buffy would be an angelus thing to do - he likes to play with his food, after all. I like faith taking charge - it shows how much stronger she's become. As for the b option, I think mopey angel could be coming to warn them - I doubt he has a strong hold on wolfram and hart yet and maybe some enemies are going to try hit his weak point - buffy. They underestimated the situation though, not expecting slayers. Angel is in danger from the slayers though if its him - but if its a pizza boy/warlock there to help them and warn them of something bad... That's me basically throwing out some ideas for all the not yet participating authors |
| 02nd Apr 12 Ch: 4 |
Oh man all these plot twists are awesome! It's really had to choose...but I choose option B! Cause we know Angel will do anything for Buffy! |
| 02nd Apr 12 Ch: 4 |
My vote is a. Luving this story so much everyone. |
| 02nd Apr 12 Ch: 4 |
Hm, definitely liked this chapter! I think i wanna go with option A! I feel like a bit more drama and Angel was never my favorite person. Plus i feel there's no way he would take over W&H without Angelus showing his face. Andd you know, Angelus is hella funny! Can't wait to see Buffy's reaction haha! |
| 02nd Apr 12 Ch: 4 |
First I must say I was totally laughing at all the theories everyone was throwing around. And some were even close to the crazy workings that are in my head. Second Bravo you guys are amazing every single one of you that has come after me. And you too Liz for giving me the crazy idea. Excellent chapter Rosemont and here in my mind they were just regular ol' police and you made to so much more. I just loved take charge Faith *Is it hot in here?*As for my vote: I vote C. I think we need a little Fluff since Buffy has seemed to remember I think that talk needs to be had. |
| 02nd Apr 12 Ch: 4 |
Uh... wow, this is becoming a tricky situation. I don't know what to think anymore. Well, I like the Street Fighter reference. It's definitely something to reference to once you mention Akuma. Angel being Angelus again, ugh. I will just hope for the best that the darker side of him didn't just show up. Also, if he is Angelus, I think there are plenty of slayers that will try to kill him. I will choose B! |
| 02nd Apr 12 Ch: 4 |
Howdy! I'd go with number two, mainly 'cause of the novelty of having a demon being smart. But really, a combo of one and two is great. Angel is obsessed with Buffy's safety and going seriously overboard about it. meanwhile our little demonic ronin have taken the job as an opportunity to whack some opposition. I mean, taking out Faith is quite the feather...didn't count on ALL the other Slayers though! As for Angel, well, the boy never was too rational when it comes to Buffy (and vice-versa...Anne Rice needs to be locked in a room with Andrew for 24 hours). I could see Angel slide (he was not a long-term planner), and Wes definitely (Wes was VERY 'ends justify any means'). Gunn? Maybe (guy had an inferiority complex like Faith's). But Faith would know that Lorne and Fred would NEVER sell out like that. Fooled maybe (as they were), but never turned. So Faith needs to buy time, figure out the real scoop, figure out what's causin' the willies, and figure out how much of the demon's story was screwing around, how much fact. Oh, and eat the pizza that just got delivered...cause that is just OLD! The Cracker! |
| 02nd Apr 12 Ch: 4 |
Just our sweet mopey Angel please. I get so tired of Angel being the bad guy, yea he screwed Buffy and they have a fucking strange relationship, but honestly he wasn't that bad once he left Sunny D. this was such a good read, I do like when Faith plays to her strengths and does the right thing, mostly. That was pretty funny with all the interruptions and asides, because Andrew was being his nerd self and Xander also. Just Angel, no self-important egotistical Angelus please. |
| 02nd Apr 12 Ch: 4 |
Haha, and the plot thickens again. Thank you for the addition! I'm going to vote for A. |
| 02nd Apr 12 Ch: 4 |
A angelus! can't wait to hear buffys thoughts on kissing faith! love take charge faith, and ken is still a brat! bravo, very nice job. |
| 01st Apr 12 Ch: 4 |
Option C. Love the chapter here. Nice job and looking forward to more. |
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