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LunasMeow(Signed)
19th Dec 12
Ch: 2
Okay... the sudden development of regressed, visually replacive Buffy is kinda, jarring, but other than that it's okay. My vote *would* have been C, had I been on the site earlier.

Lilly(Signed)
25th Apr 12
Ch: 2
"Did she just say virile?" "Do you think she knows what it means?" Loved it. Nice job with dialog fitting the characters so well.
Enjoying how concerned Faith is about Buffy and how well they seem to be getting along.
Love the use of a slayer dream between the two. It's such a great means of very private and personal communication.
Surprising twist having Buffy awake thinking she's still in High School at 16 and that Faith is Angel. Maybe because they are the two people she has the most intense feelings for? Hmm?

I would have voted for a combination of B and C, where Faith stays to help Buffy as someone distracts the police.

madison4865(Signed)
17th Mar 12
Ch: 2
hug.gif absolutely vote for A, like the whole buffy confusion!! and xander
Author Feedback: thanks, madison!

DragonWriter17(Anonymous)
13th Mar 12
Ch: 2
Holy crap! Didn't see that twist coming. I'm pretty sure I'm past the voting deadline, but I definitely don't want A. Y'all keep up the good work. This is fun! clap.gif
Author Feedback: it's still fun to read people's reactions even after the voting deadline smile.gif

F_Electum(Signed)
01st Mar 12
Ch: 2
Amnesia nice twist, I'm curious to see how Faith will deal with a teenage, Angel obsessed Buffy, as much as I want option cool.gif Faith to stay and help Buffy, if she is still wanted by the police, which is more than likely, its not gonna help the current sitch if Faith is arrested. So with that in mind I'm going to vote for:

Option C: Someone distracts the police, so Faith can figure out her next move.
Author Feedback: well, not quite amnesia. since she remembers who she is and everyone is...it's just that her memories from the past so many years seem to be gone. and that little pesky detail of thinking Faith is Angel smile.gif methinks magic is involved. but i'm not the one steering this ship anymore.

thanks for the vote, F_E

28th Feb 12
Ch: 2
Whaaaaa amnesia Buffy?!?? What is going on? She's got the memories of him blurred into a Faith package?? blink.gif

Option B please I'm so confused & need to know what is going on lol.

Love the inclusion of the Slayer dreams, hope there are lots more to come thumbup.gif
Author Feedback: well, not quite amnesia. but something like it for lack of a better word. i'll let the other authors figure it out though smile.gif

and i'm sure if you asked extra super nice another author can include s'more Slayer dreams

thanks, ashley!

Celtic Tiger(Signed)
27th Feb 12
Ch: 2
B. Faith stays to help a very confused Buffy.


Cops have no idea who Faith is, but get very confused by Buffys answers. Misunderstandings abound.
Author Feedback: wacky misunderstandings are the best smile.gif thanks for the vote, Celtic!

Squiz(Signed)
27th Feb 12
Ch: 2
That's some crazy shit right there!! laugh.gif

What in tarnations is going in poor Buffy's pubecant candy-filled head? Genious.

I vote for B. Heck, there's no way Faith would leave Buffy to save her own neck from the Po Po... Or would she?
Author Feedback: totally crazy, squiz. when i first read what GUAK wrote i was like o.O oh snap. what a twist smile.gif

hooray for all the creative minds in the BnF community!

thanks for the vote smile.gif

23rd Feb 12
Ch: 2
I choose option C, since too much can go wrong with option B, namely Faith gets sent back to prison by the cops soon as they recognize her, etc. and option A wouldn't happen unless Faith were to take a giant leap backward towards being her old self and I really don't see that one happening at this point so option C it is

Not sure how I feel about the amnesia twist though. Definitely not a direction I expected this story to take on, I'll be honest. Either way, looking forward to the next one already and see what the next author does to change things up some more happy.gif
Author Feedback: The Buffy confusion blindsided me, too, T. I'm curious to see how ya'll take it from here and glad that I just get to sit back and read now smile.gif

Moquito(Signed)
23rd Feb 12
Ch: 2
My vote is for option C. Great story so far guys!
Author Feedback: thanks for the continued support, Moquito!

swarm012(Signed)
23rd Feb 12
Ch: 2
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What a twist! Interesting, I vote for
C. Someone distracts the police so Faith can figure out her next move.
Author Feedback: totally didn't see that coming. thanks for the vote, swarmy!

hmmm(Anonymous)
23rd Feb 12
Ch: 2
vote B. Faith came so far in the series. Running would make her back slide.
Author Feedback: thanks for the vote!

jstud918(Signed)
23rd Feb 12
Ch: 2
I say B. Wanna see how Faith deals with an amnesiac Buffy smile.gif
Author Feedback: what if Buffy's faking it!!?? just so she can get smooches! hehehehehehehheheh

i kid. it's clearly more complex than that. right? right??

heh, thanks jstud

Micktrex(Signed)
23rd Feb 12
Ch: 2
Well now theres a twist! I didnt see that coming. Personally im picking option B next. God help who has to explain the weird retro amnesia in the next chapter haha

Surprised to see this chapter up so fast. Lucky i bothered to check the site today. Great job Ash. smile.gif
Author Feedback: i think JellyLikeKelly did a superb job with chapter 3 explaining the wackiness of Chapter 2. I certainly didn't envy having to write an explanation or even a guess of an explanation smile.gif

hopefully there'll be a new chapter every 2 weeks. we'll see if y'all can take the pressure. thanks, mike!

Rosemont(Signed)
23rd Feb 12
Ch: 2
Well, this is hard to choose. I think I'm about as confused as Buffy smile.gif So I choose A. Faith runs, but only to get help.
Author Feedback: don't be confused, Rosemont! just enjoy the ride smile.gif

Ltlconf(Signed)
23rd Feb 12
Ch: 2
Howdy!

Well she stays, the cops arrest her and that very unrealistic 25-to-life sentence becomes just 'life'.
Period.
Distraction only really givers her time to fill in Willow on everything...it still comes down to arrest now or run and buy time for Willow and Angel to come up with a solution.
On the other hand if she runs, no one says she has to run out of the country or something. She can just run out of the hospital while dialin' Willow and asking for help while lettin' her know what's the what with Buffy and that she needs help. Then she can make feet for LA and Angel can hide her. Going to Willow and Co. endangers them with 'accessory, aid-and-abeting' charges if the cops follow.
Staying only works if the cops have no idea who Faith is and won't get curious and run a APB.

I vote distraction, a call to Willow to let her know what's going on, and wether or not the cops alre looking for her specifically for her. If so, let Willow know she was running and for were. If not, brazen it out.


The Cracker.
Author Feedback: thanks for the vote and your thoughts, cracker smile.gif

Anon(Anonymous)
23rd Feb 12
Ch: 2
Obviously its a glamour mixed with amnesia.
So did buffy faint because of the wound or did faith punch her? because that's confusing....unless its because of the jabbing.

Option B or C
Author Feedback: Perhaps. Or it's a crazy crazy spell. Or it's the after-shock of the Hellmouth imploding. Or Buffy's faking so she can kiss Faith. But the beauty of this story, it's not up to me to decide. I'm just the wizard behind the curtain.

23rd Feb 12
Ch: 2
I vote for option B. Cool story, can't wait for more.
Author Feedback: thanks for the continued support, cassie!

broken_cow(Signed)
23rd Feb 12
Ch: 2
Give_us_a_Kiss,

Wow, you have definitely threw a twist here! Buffy thinks Faith is Angel! How could that be possible? Sure they are both broody and depressed most of the time, but I'm sure Faith doesn't have that extra appendage! laugh.gif

Hmm...

C-Someone distracts the police so Faith can figure out her next move.

I think Faith may need some extra time to work her magic.
Author Feedback: if Faith has an extra appendage, i'm leaving this community forever. *makes a face* false advertising.

thanks for the vote, cow!

kaylee214(Signed)
23rd Feb 12
Ch: 2
I pick option B: Faith stays to help a very confused Buffy!
Author Feedback: thanks, kaylee smile.gif

23rd Feb 12
Ch: 2
Intriguing smile.gif I choose C, let's see what she does with a little assistance!
Author Feedback: curiouser and curiouser. thanks, DHD!

Elphaba(Signed)
23rd Feb 12
Ch: 2
B please, I think teenage Buffy is cute, but I worry what that says about me...
Author Feedback: *coughs* pervert *coughs* wink.gif

thanks for the vote, Elphaba!

Tjemd(Signed)
23rd Feb 12
Ch: 2
Haha, Buffy's back to making decisions, and working herself too hard.

clap.gif Yay! They shared another dream! And Faith's fumbling over her own words was adorable. happy.gif

Wow, this is hysterical. But how do you confuse a female slayer with a male vamp? Don't they even feel different?

I think I'm going to have to vote for B - Faith sticks it out. This conversation should be great. biggrin.gif
Author Feedback: any time Faith is uncharacteristically awkward it's awesome smile.gif

this confusion spell or whatever it turns out to be is quite the plot twist. it's amazing what the creativity on this site comes up with!

thanks for the support, tjemd smile.gif

Jojo(Signed)
23rd Feb 12
Ch: 2
Wow...what an interesting turn of events! Ruuuuuun Faith...jk...lets go with option B! thumbup.gif
Author Feedback: hehehe, RUN, FAITH, RUN!

thanks for the continued support, jojo smile.gif

blackwan(Signed)
23rd Feb 12
Ch: 2
My vote is B.
Really loving this story. I can't wait for the next chapter.
Author Feedback: thanks for the continued support, blackwan!
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