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| 19th Dec 12 Ch: 12 |
Hey Liz, great work as usual. One tiny thing bugged me. The conduit. It came back and offered closure for the situation. It just struck me that it's very unlike the Powers to do that. They're kind of dicks. They show up, demand assistance, and leave you hanging. It wasn't a big thing bugging me, just like a tiny twinge in your gut that you can ignore and move on. But I know you like hearing every detail, so I gave it to ya. Other than that, it was as satisfying as everything else I've read by you. You're awesome, so feed my need. I've switched back to Fuffy from the other fandoms I was lost in for a while. Although I don't have as much time to read as I used to, since I'm working again. And I'm spending time exploring Japan while I'm here so I'm out and about more than ever. Keep up the awesome work, and never stop writing Fuffy, even if you deviate now and then like I do. It only makes returning all the better.  |
| 19th Dec 12 Ch: 11 |
Dammit Mick! Does Liz have three ideas, one for each switch? Or is this just a way of giving us a fake choice? Since it doesn't say what is what, she could have only one way to finish the fic and leave us none the wiser! Wolf, Ram, of Hart. I was gonna say all three, but since I gotta pick one... Hart. |
| 19th Dec 12 Ch: 10 |
Well done. The taking of Faith's soul and the way it affects her, both of her... I didn't vote for the portal because I thought it'd be too easy, but you're making it work. Hopefully the next author does too. Probably B. A, not too much with Willow using the magic, and having her black eyes again. She'd do enough damage to protect herself. C just reminds me of Gollum and a path through Mordor for some reason. |
| 19th Dec 12 Ch: 9 |
Not sure what I should say about this chapter... It's left my review muse stumped. Not bad or anything, just... I dunno. Anyway, I did like how they mirrored each other in a good way for once. Vote would have been A. |
| 19th Dec 12 Ch: 8 |
Well Dragon, you had to be the one to throw the tension back in, although there's no good story without it, and you did start to clean it up at the end. Not much really happened in this chapter, so there isn't too much to comment on, but there's always chapters like that, you just got stuck with this one. Vote would have been... C. Too soon for A, not to mention too lucky, since they only got one computer of many, and they missed the one they apparently should have gotten before it was destroyed. And too easy for B. |
| 19th Dec 12 Ch: 7 |
Closet scene? Niiiice. Writing? Do I really have to say how good you are? We all know. Choice? Hmmm. any of the three would work, but the second is probably best... Choice: B! |
| 19th Dec 12 Ch: 6 |
Lorne!!!!! Fuck yeah! You get extra points for portraying the guy we all know and loved. And now you just made me remember that he's dead. Dammit. Good writing Squiz, as usual. I would vote B, but that's pretty obvious that the fic should head in that direction now. |
| 19th Dec 12 Ch: 5 |
Nice. Kept the flow going good, and the little moments with the two of them were well done. As expected, you're already known to be good Hayley. This chapter makes me wish this was a long fic and not a short collaboration. I would have voted... for a mix of B and C. Contact the LA gang, but not head to LA immediately. They need to finish healing (all but Wood) before they go into another battle. But since I'm limited... B. |
| 19th Dec 12 Ch: 4 |
Fuck. Yes. I love how you just took this story and made it your own. It was just veering left and right, then you came and drove it right down the lane and got a hole in one. Fuck yes. I will definitely be on the lookout for more of your work. My vote: A, for the win! |
| 19th Dec 12 Ch: 3 |
Very good way of continuing on from the last chapter. You fit it in seamlessly. My personal vote *would* have been A, but C would probably be better for the fic as it could allow for Buffy to get kidnapped or something while Faith is away. B- No way. Fuck Wood. |
| 19th Dec 12 Ch: 2 |
Okay... the sudden development of regressed, visually replacive Buffy is kinda, jarring, but other than that it's okay. My vote *would* have been C, had I been on the site earlier. |
| 19th Dec 12 Ch: 1 |
Dammit Liz! I was just getting into it, and then you ask what's it gonna be. I'd forgotten it was a choose your own adventure! It'd be even more epic, if this was an *actual* choose your own adventure, where every decision had a chapter, and you jumped to the proper chapter based on the choice you wanted to follow. BTW, my vote would have been to stay at the hospital, though I will note that I don't think that would be what Buffy would decide, stubborn as she can be about hospitals... |
| 16th Nov 12 Ch: 12 |
This was a great read. I was not on the site when people were helping to create it, but I appreciate the finished product very much. |
| 30th Oct 12 Ch: 12 |
the best thing i have ever read and i mean that, the symetry the way it all flowed together i agreed with most of the votes but it was absolutely brilliant please do another one with the different writers! x |
| 22nd Aug 12 Ch: 12 |
Great ending, it was a fun and crazy ride. I am glad to have been a part of it. Thanks to all the authors everyone did such a great job putting their own voice to the story. ...until next time. |
| 20th Aug 12 Ch: 12 |
Yay! Terrific ending! You totally psyched me out when Angel was in Faith's body. I was like the famous painting, The Scream. Nooooooo!  |
| 15th Aug 12 Ch: 12 |
Sucha a great story. Loved it!! Thanks to all you authors for your hard work!!!  |
| 15th Aug 12 Ch: 12 |
 THAT my dear story teller...was a very good read!!!!!...i couldnt wait to read the chapter as soon as it came out, or that i saw it out...very good. thank you for writing |
| 15th Aug 12 Ch: 12 |
Buffy finally did it; she saved the world again. Haha Faith and Angel switched bodies. That's hilarious. Too bad Angel knew first hand that Buffy did choose Faith over him. Oh well. Yay, another adventure completed. I am so proud of everyone. |
| 15th Aug 12 Ch: 12 |
Oh my God. I loved this chapter! I got squealies when Micktrex poked me to inform it'd been updated, and I went clicking over to this site to read it.  It's always great to see how the author following on from the last chapter takes the information they're given. Everyone's brains work differently, so you'll get a mix of everything when making a collaboration. Sexy. Cute. Funny. Horror. Darkness. Sad. We got all of those in the big, twisty turny thing that is this fan fic, and it was just amazing seeing each new update. This chapter was well written, funny, sad, nostalgic, and sexy all at once. The start of it felt like horror, as well. How do you even manage to cram so much into one chapter? Unpossible!  There were some funnies that made me laugh out loud, such as: "You sure know how to make an exit." From Kennedy, and "What the hell, you guys? Was there a sale at the ammo shop or what?" When Angel and Faith got tranq'd.  This is a great way to end the fic. I feel honoured to have been able to take part in it, and I thank everyone for all of their amazing chapers. Lastly, I thank Liz, who got the gears churning for it to kick off in the first place. Fantastic. |
| 15th Aug 12 Ch: 12 |
thanks for the neat wrap up. when you said it was the final chapter, I thought no there is still unresolved stuff, but you resolved it, with out being too cliche, and it was kinda sweet too. great story. I will probably reread in moments when I want a good fuffy and don't feel like sorting through new stories. |
| 15th Aug 12 Ch: 12 |
I have to say you hit the nail on the head with this final chapter. You covered the main issues and themes from the previous chapter all the way to the beginning of this story and packaged this collab up with a nice, shiny bow.  I'll admit there are things I might have written differently in this final début, but then I'm sure every other author who was part of this would have approached it in their own unique way, but overall I'm happy and quite contended to see this project come to a satisfying close. It was fun, challenging and a great experience to collaborate with everyone on this. If you ever feel like working together like this, or in some other way, let me know, Liz. You know how to get hold of me. |
| 14th Aug 12 Ch: 12 |
REALLY hate to see this fic end! you guys did such a WONDERFUL job this was such a good ending, thought it was hilarious when buffy kissed faith only to find out it was angel maybe one day you guys will do another? who knows, but THAQNKS to ALL the WRITERS for thier hard work! |
| 09th Aug 12 Ch: 11 |
Not sure how to vote so i will try here c |
| 26th Jul 12 Ch: 11 |
Uh oh I almost forgot to vote. I'm gonna go C. I can't believe the crazy twist this story has taken, and leave to Willow to merge the three to make them the strongest they can be. Another great update Hopefully they can get home soon. |
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